In which I lay open my heart and ask an honest question

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 11-Jan-2009 8:08:29

I used to wait for light because I believed it was older than the dark,
I used to wait for dreams because I believed they were things of the light.
Now I only wait tiredly for shadows and watch everything pass in a daze,
Weighed down by my own life, I stumble on the rock-strewn path.
Sent to my knees by the hands distorting my life,
When you came all that weight lifted away.
Can I wait for you, will you be there?
I don't know if you see what I do,
Only your face, as I get back to my feet,
Get my bearings, and move on.
I would reach out to you but I am afraid,
Would you turn me away or would you not?
And now I sit here waiting for the tired old shadows,
And I don't believe in dreams because they're fickle, illusory things,
And I gave up on emotion and on my heart.
Why did you reach back out to me, what drew you?
I thought you hated me, like they all used to.
Oh fickle heart, will it hurt me again?
Tell me please that you're not a lie too,
Because I'll be honest, I don't know if I can let you fade away.
I honestly don't know what to say,
I honestly don't know how to say it.
If I lay open my heart will you step on it and stick a knife in it?
It deserves it, it's a traitor thing.
If I'm honest to you will you call me weak
Just like they always do?
Should I follow my heart or does it lie,
Should I find the words to say or would I only fall on my face?
I just don't know what to say,
Here I lay open my heart, please recognize what it means.
If you don't, that's okay,
I'll never find the words to say.
Here I lay bare a secret I was afraid to show,
My words I promise are from the heart,
Because I'd die before I lied to you.
Should I let my t(aitor heart have its way,
Or just forget what I want to say,
And let you figure it all out another day
And then it may all be too late.

Post 2 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 11-Jan-2009 11:10:23

I'd never hurt you in any way. Yes. I'd help you in any way I could. I'd never step on your heart, its to precious for that.
I'm not sure if you were writing this for me or not, but I just wanted to say that If you did, I'm always here for you!

Post 3 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 11-Jan-2009 15:41:49

I wasn't Deaven, oh I'm so sorry to two people, my heart is a traitor. A goddamn traitor. I shouldn't have posted this in the first place. Chris N should revoke my writers' block and deep thoughts board access from midnight to 8 a.m. in the morning or something...

Post 4 by CrazedMidget (Sweet fantacy's really do come in small packages!) on Sunday, 11-Jan-2009 16:26:39

wow, i love it

Post 5 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 11-Jan-2009 16:33:58

It's pretty I know, that was sort of the point, and that I was trying to put as much emotion as I could in here. Despite what many may see or think, I don't usually do that anymore up here, I think I did it... twice. And it was never like this. I took a risk of hurting people, and getting hurt, when I posted this, but it will all work out in the end the way it was supposed to so whether I get hurt or don't, I have the one reassurance that everything works out, and if I get hurt or anyone gets hurt at first its most likely that in the end we'll all understand why.

Post 6 by andrew1989 (Account disabled) on Monday, 19-Jan-2009 10:29:26

hmmm.